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There was a Young Lady whose chin
Resembled the point of a pin;
So she had it made sharp,
And purchased a harp,
And played several tunes with her chin.
2005-12-21 07:51 am (UTC)
Yes if you were wondering I do know Lear
Lear it is
I studied his words
When trying to learn
Just how could I
So short of words
Make my poetry lighter
I can mimic it but I shan't.
Many of the nonsense verses of Edward Lear which take the form now known as a limerick end with a line that merely repeats the first line with but slight variation.
Since his time the necessity for the last line to provide a twist in the tail, or a kick in the pants in our less genteel age, has become apparent.
Accordingly I have undertaken, in what I hope will be taken to be sincere affection for the originals, and not sacrilege, to provide some of Mr Lear's limericks with a little more punch in their final lines.
Unfortunately many modern writers seem to think that all limericks should be obscene and some have 'reduced' Lear's work in this way. My aim has been to 'enhance' his work with a little added wit or humour of a simple kind. The new lines are in italic.
Lear's original printer ran the two short lines with the second rhyme into one line, making the limerick a quatrain, but we print them separately, showing the five lines.
Mr Lear's last line is generally retained, converting the limerick into a six-line verse with the rhyme-pattern of three couplets AABBAA. Sometimes the middle rhyme is repeated internal to the extra line. In a few cases two alternative lines are added.
2005-12-21 07:53 am (UTC)
Re: Yes if you were wondering I do know Lear
That's very cool! :) I figured you did, after reading more.